You recently travelled with a certain airline. Write a letter to the manager about your experience. Please say
- Where and when did you travel?
- What did you like or dislike?
- What can you suggest for improvement?
Dear Mr.Jackson,
I am writing with regards my experience of using your airline.
To begin with, I travelled to Germany with some of my colleagues for a scientific conference last month. I decided to travel with your airline because of my husband's recommendation. He has used your airline several times and was very satisfied with your service.
I also like to draw your attention to some positive points that I like. First of all, the crew were really warm and welcoming. They were well-trained and well-organized. Besides, the plane was in a good situation and very clean.
On the other hand, as a negative point, there was not enough pillows and blankets in the cabin. When I asked the crew to have a pillow, they said that they are run out of pillows.
To rectify this problem, I suggest to increase the number of pillows and blankets for each passenger.
I hope this information will be some of the assistance to you.
I thank you for your time and consideration.
Yours sincerely,
Yalda Asgari.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...me and consideration. Yours sincerely, Yalda Asgari.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, if, really, so, well, first of all, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 847.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 174.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86781609195 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84064478286 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 127.690721649 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.632183908046 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 260.1 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 21.60746753 44.8134815571 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 60.5 76.5299724578 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.4285714286 16.8248392259 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.42857142857 4.34317383033 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.29896907216 163% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217442339496 0.216113520407 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0687952458566 0.0766984524023 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0647147888782 0.0603063233224 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103543734297 0.12726935374 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0707550405553 0.0580467560999 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 8.37731958763 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.08 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 8.62886597938 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 75.8426966292 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.75 Out of 9
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