Some feel that school uniforms make schools safer for students, create a "level playing field" that reduces socioeconomic disparities and encourage children to focus on their studies rather than their clothes.
Others say school uniforms infringe upon students' right to express their individuality, have no positive effect on behavior and academic achievement.
Discuss both sides & give your opinion. Write at least 250 words.
A few believe that following dress code system is more protective and decline the sense of inequality among students. Moreover, it will motivate the kids to concentrate on education rather than the attires. Others assume that, it will interfere in expressing their differences and has no impact on their attitudes and attainments. Following uniformity in educational environment will nurture various good deeds among younger generations.
Wearing the same sort of dresses in educational centers makes scholars of different social class feel more comfortable and secure. Hence, it develops the sense of unity among them, such an atmosphere makes them more interest in learning and get deviated from other distractions like show off of fashion costumes. Apart from that, the children are identified easier in the midst of illegal activities. For example, a high school in my hometown recognized their students by uniforms in a shooting spot after they bunked their class during school hours.
Certain people think that wearing an in-different dress in teaching institution may encroach the school children from the pride of their uniqueness. Moreover, it has not caused any change in their conducts as well as in their institutional accomplishments. In such scenarios, it will be difficult to control the students and they may breach the rules. For example, the Engineering University of Nilgiris is not recommending their students to wear the same type of costumes. Whereas, the students have violated the regulations by making the public to participate in negotiation campaign against their college.
In conclusion, wearing an identical outfit in the academies are better for protective learning atmosphere and kids will be devoted to school-work. In contrast, others presume the students may violate and has no influence on their characters. I strongly believe uniforms helps learners to have higher opinions of themselves by giving them the confidence to perform better.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...re and develop a sense of impartiality. Hence it decreases the economic class differe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, whereas, apart from, for example, in conclusion, in contrast, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 26.3917525773 167% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1743.0 937.175257732 186% => OK
No of words: 318.0 206.0 154% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.48113207547 4.54256449028 121% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 3.78020617076 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94511755559 2.54303337028 116% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 127.690721649 149% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59748427673 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 533.7 290.88556701 183% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.41237113402 120% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 1.44329896907 416% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.8156933116 44.8134815571 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.9375 76.5299724578 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.875 16.8248392259 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.4375 4.34317383033 217% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280498323435 0.216113520407 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0798547686333 0.0766984524023 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0708449840618 0.0603063233224 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162629543757 0.12726935374 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0406914060782 0.0580467560999 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 8.37731958763 171% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 70.7449484536 62% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 7.45979381443 160% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.5 8.71597938144 166% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.89 7.59969072165 130% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 41.2886597938 259% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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