Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Music has gradually become a universal language. It is believed that music connects people from different backgrounds and status. I completely agree with this point of view.
The connection between people is strengthened due to the prevalent presence of music. The first and foremost reason saying that is the problem of the language barrier in communication is eroded because of music. People from different nations or areas can listen, share, and comment on the same song, in turn, get the same message from that song. Listeners who share the same hobby could easily make friends through music. Secondly, in our globalized world, music has played an important role in the job of spreading news and warnings. For example, a Vietnamese music video showing how to wash hands properly amid the Covid-19 pandemic, which went viral quickly, has become a global instruction for all people across the globe.
Furthermore, music can be seen as a way to help people from different generations and backgrounds interact with each other more easily. Many popular music videos have been welcomed by both the young and the elder. The dances and melodies from these videos have been used as icebreakers in communication. This means that people can use music to start a conversation with others regardless of the disparity in their socio-economic status. This makes the complex process of beginning or maintaining a relationship become much easier.
In conclusion, music is undoubtedly a valuable treasure for humans. If used well, music could have a powerful impact on everybody’s life.
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A hard word game called…
A hard word game called Foodle combines your love of food with your talent for creative description. To participate in the culinary fun, ask your friends to name various goodies based on your imaginative descriptions of them.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, then, well, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1326.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22047244094 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82071159689 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.622047244094 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 405.9 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.1643310178 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.875 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.875 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.25 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233984666906 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0782740144232 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0567798648385 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149294108822 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0642320104635 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.7 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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