Online shopping is significantly increasing. What effects does this have on the environment and the types of jobs required?
In the world of today, people also depend on online shopping site and they provide lots of benefits for individuals. In this essay, I discuss how they affect the environment and what kind of job is essential for online shopping.
In the first place, nowadays, people become workaholic so they do not have time for shopping so this is the best choice for everyone. This way is also beneficial for nature. Firstly, people place orders from everywhere so that they can not ramble for particular things and thousand of products available on an online website. consequently, personal bike exhaust is decreasing. In addition, more plastic bag is required for product packing thus, in the future, some recycling problem is established. This is the biggest bad cause of an effect on the environment.
Moreover, the online shopping site has needed to do recruit for various types of work. First and foremost, the company wants lots of people to delivery boys for moving courier at consumers' homes. Secondly, warehouse in several types of different type of departments like order managing, order packing etc. for that they also want a manager. What is more, customer executive is necessary for handling customer quire and they also give satisfaction to the consumer.
To put it in nutshell, I pen down and saying that, online shopping provides people to numerous advantage. online shopping has caused complicated changes in the types of jobs, introducing new ones and the elimination of traditional jobs.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: a thousand
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Suggestion: Consequently
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Suggestion: Online
... provides people to numerous advantage. online shopping has caused complicated changes...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, in addition, kind of, what is more, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1259.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 245.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1387755102 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74941514359 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.595918367347 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 399.6 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.8747600549 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.9333333333 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3333333333 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.8 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226830028639 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0749670419242 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0606840240399 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144509734832 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0383256421494 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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