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A person who knowingly commits a crime has broken the social contract and should not retain any civil rights or the right to benefit from his or her own labor.

"Lesser evil or more evil ",to do the lesser evil or more evil ,is at the end of the evil only.Similarly a person who commits the crime has broken the law .Even if the intention of the criminal were for the greater good or not,crime is crime.the criminal must face the consequences.The prompt suggest that the person who commits a crime knowingly should not retain any civil rights or benefit from their own labor.This concept as suggested by the author of the prompt is to thereby conclude that once you commit a crime knowingly you dont deserve to retain any civil rights or benefit from yourlabor,in my opnion this is wrong for the following reasons.
Everyone deserves a second chance inorder to improve, thus to abide according to the prompt would be to say that a person who commits a crime does not deserve a second chance.No person is above or below the law ,no matter what everyone must have equal rights.Thus in my opnion the person who commits a crime knowingly should retain their civil rights and to benefit from their labor.Consider for example Mike Ross who forged his law degree because he was expelled from his law college for the rest of his life since he was caught taking exams for others.
Mike Ross was very passionate about praticising law , he had helped hundreds of innocennt people to give them the justice they truly deserve before he was charged for his crimes.How would it be fair if mike doesnt have the right to retain any civil rights or benefit from his labor.
To sum up,to abide by the prompt absolutely would be discrimination amongst criminals or to say that not all criminals have equal rights,thus in my opinion the prompt is extreme to do so as suggested by it.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, second, similarly, so, thus, for example, in my opinion, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 33.0505617978 82% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 58.6224719101 63% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 12.9106741573 15% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1413.0 2235.4752809 63% => OK
No of words: 301.0 442.535393258 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69435215947 5.05705443957 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.55969084622 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59894964834 2.79657885939 93% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 215.323595506 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.491694352159 0.4932671777 100% => OK
syllable_count: 452.7 704.065955056 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 20.2370786517 20% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 75.0 23.0359550562 326% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 189.592325794 60.3974514979 314% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 353.25 118.986275619 297% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 75.25 23.4991977007 320% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 17.5 5.21951772744 335% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 32.0 7.80617977528 410% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 10.2758426966 10% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.408884990305 0.243740707755 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.224955904115 0.0831039109588 271% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.142388851819 0.0758088955206 188% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.224955904115 0.150359130593 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.142388851819 0.0667264976115 213% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 38.3 14.1392134831 271% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 3.81 48.8420337079 8% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 31.4 12.1743820225 258% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 11.11 12.1639044944 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.35 8.38706741573 123% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 100.480337079 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 54.0 11.8971910112 454% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 32.0 11.2143820225 285% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.

Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, second, similarly, so, thus, for example, in my opinion, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this: