real talent of a popular musician cannot be accurately assessed until the musician has been dead for several generations so that his or her fame does not interfere with honest assessment

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Talent is what makes one stand out in a room full of people,if you have the tal...
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...t makes one stand out in a room full of people,if you have the talent essential ...
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Suggestion: , if
...one stand out in a room full of people,if you have the talent essential to a fiel...
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...full or even popular at the task at hand are high.The prompt suggests that real t...
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...n popular at the task at hand are high.The prompt suggests that real talent of a p...
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Suggestion: In
...es not interfere with honest assessment.In my opnion this is true to some extent ...
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...h honest assessment.In my opnion this is true to some extent but also false in so...
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... some cases for the following reasons. Consider medieval ages during which the ...
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...uring which the kings rule was absolute.Suppose the kings son that is the succesor to t...
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Suggestion: kings'; king's
...the kings rule was absolute.Suppose the kings son that is the succesor to the throne ...
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Suggestion: Granted
...ne in the near were to become a muscian.Granted the royal status of the prince it would...
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Suggestion: wouldn't
...anted the royal status of the prince it wouldnt be difficult for him to become a popula...
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...ult for him to become a popular musician .Since the prince is of royal blood not m...
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...t for him to become a popular musician .Since the prince is of royal blood not matter...
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Suggestion: Thus
... praise him because of his royal status.Thus in the case not long after the prince ...
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Suggestion: Thus,
... praise him because of his royal status.Thus in the case not long after the prince ...
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...use of his royal status.Thus in the case not long after the prince has past away ...
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...honest assesment of the muscian could be possible because of his fame. On the ...
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...ould be possible because of his fame. On the contrary one could argue if the m...
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...rtinity that the musician becomes famous .In this case the critics would grant an ...
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...inity that the musician becomes famous .In this case the critics would grant an ho...
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...critics would grant an honest assessment at any given time of their music no matt...
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...time of their music no matter how famous .Consider robin sparkles currently a heav...
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...me of their music no matter how famous .Consider robin sparkles currently a heavy metal ...
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Suggestion: a lot of fans
...tic shift to heavy metal music she lost a lot of fan following .Once who was impentrable eve...
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...al music she lost a lot of fan following .Once who was impentrable even by crtics ...
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... music she lost a lot of fan following .Once who was impentrable even by crtics is n...
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...r her current heavy metal singing beca Thus we can sum that the prpmt that real...
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Suggestion: ,
...re with honest assessment is situational ,in some cases it might be true and false...
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...ht be true and false in some other cases,it would be hard to come up with a genaral...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then, thus, in some cases, on the contrary

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 33.0505617978 97% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 58.6224719101 80% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1628.0 2235.4752809 73% => OK
No of words: 354.0 442.535393258 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.5988700565 5.05705443957 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33761313653 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53569115696 2.79657885939 91% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 215.323595506 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.508474576271 0.4932671777 103% => OK
syllable_count: 521.1 704.065955056 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 20.2370786517 15% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 118.0 23.0359550562 512% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 195.940467149 60.3974514979 324% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 542.666666667 118.986275619 456% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 118.0 23.4991977007 502% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 20.3333333333 5.21951772744 390% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 30.0 7.80617977528 384% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 10.2758426966 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.529914269226 0.243740707755 217% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.368893531248 0.0831039109588 444% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.170873409423 0.0758088955206 225% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.353351987648 0.150359130593 235% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.222764160244 0.0667264976115 334% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 59.2 14.1392134831 419% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -39.83 48.8420337079 -82% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.92365168539 184% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 48.1 12.1743820225 395% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 10.58 12.1639044944 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.81 8.38706741573 141% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 100.480337079 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 27.5 11.8971910112 231% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 49.2 11.2143820225 439% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 49.0 11.7820224719 416% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.

Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.