Write a letter to your landlord telling him how satisfied you are with your apartment and the improvement needed. Tell him,
What are you happy with in the apartment.
Areas that need approvement.
How the change will be good for you.
Dear Mr. Goyal,
I hope you are doing well. I am writing to express my gratification with the facilities made available by you in our current dwelling and to get some repair work done for better living.
One of the best qualities of this apartment is the eye-catching interior, that is designed rigorously. Apart from the interior, the overall infrastructure of the society with peaceful as well as magnificent surroundings, including all the amenities that one can ask for, is worth appreciation. Moreover, the south-west facing balcony with splendid sunset views makes each evening special.
However, some parts of the flat need improvement, especially the kitchen and the main door. The chimney makes a loud sound, perhaps because the glass inside it is broken. Besides, the doorknob of the entrance gate is loose. Although I got it repaired once, the same problem persisted again. Thus, I request you to get it changed.
As I am putting up alone in the apartment, needless to say, both the repairs are imperative for the security purpose and to prevent any precarious situation.
I hope you would give your immediate attention to the matter. I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
Tara
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, however, if, look, moreover, so, thus, well, apart from, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1027.0 937.175257732 110% => OK
No of words: 200.0 206.0 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.135 4.54256449028 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86443275362 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 127.690721649 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.69 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 312.3 290.88556701 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 5.0 0.824742268041 606% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.4952584825 44.8134815571 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.3571428571 76.5299724578 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.2857142857 16.8248392259 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.42857142857 4.34317383033 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218337889194 0.216113520407 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0637822507151 0.0766984524023 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0466279799818 0.0603063233224 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10158740829 0.12726935374 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.057629339785 0.0580467560999 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 8.37731958763 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 70.7449484536 81% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 7.45979381443 118% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.88 8.71597938144 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 7.59969072165 112% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 41.2886597938 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.