“Prevention is better than cure”. Researching and treating diseases is too costly so it would be better to invest in preventative measures. To what extent do you agree or disagree.
It is widely believed that following proactive measures to avoid illness is more advantageous to paying an exorbitant amount of money in hospitals for treatment. I agree with this belief because most diseases are the result of negligence in daily activities by mankind.
Admittedly, people cannot prevent all precarious diseases, especially when the causes of a certain illness are not known even to the researchers and doctors. For instance, coronavirus, which is the reason of the current pandemic situation was unexpected, since the World Health Organisation was not aware of any such disease. Thus, it is undeniable that sickness cannot be prohibited until its causes are unpredictable.
However, if people are aware of the symptoms and origin of the disease, they can take all the prevention measures to remain safe. To exemplify, wearing a mask, sanitizing hands, and social distancing are the steps taken by the public to avoid exposure to the contagious COVID virus. Moreover, a vast array of infections gets transmitted mainly due to unsafe environment and unhealthy practices, such as improper/unbalanced diet, apathy to exercise or participating in physical activities, the stress of work or studies, and so on. Consequently, to get treated, people pay huge amounts to doctors and sometimes go in debt, which could be detrimental and leads to more anxiety. Also, some diseases have less or no probability of having a cure. A recent study by WHO states that almost 10% of discovered infections and severe illnesses have less than 3% chances of treatment.
To conclude, although it is not in our hands to avoid all unexpected accidents, most of them could still be prevented, if we take proper care. Not only to stay fit but also, to curb the remittance of therapies and medicines, it would be beneficial for us.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 257, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...dicines, it would be beneficial for us.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, however, if, moreover, so, still, thus, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1536.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17171717172 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06077088747 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.639730639731 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 489.6 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.0484364265 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.153846154 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8461538462 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.61538461538 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.124130674614 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0386351039262 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0274344911129 0.0667982634062 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0646186641679 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0119602685794 0.056905535591 21% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.51 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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