At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults compared to the number of adults. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
In recent times, different countries have seen the population of youths outnumber that of the elderly ones. In my opinion, the benefits far preponderates the setbacks because of the economic importance associated with such category of individuals.
Admittedly, most societies with a high percent of juveniles suffer a significant rise in crime rates; however, this can be controlled if the government implement strict preventive measures such as capital punishment or extended prison sentence. An empirical survey of Lagos done by The New Times magazine indicated a drastic drop of about 3% in murder cases over a two-year period due to the death penalty law passed by the government. Furthermore, most youths suffer from inexperience because they have not witnessed events that can inform their decision making prowess. They sometimes make decisions without considering the consequences, and could have a larger effect on the society; this is often the case in organizations run by youths.
On the flip side, while these setbacks persist, the advantages are too important to neglect. Firstly, any society that is rich with young adults have high human capital resource which is important for the success of any economy. Youths are energetic and very resourceful and can function in any sector of the economy, thereby supporting the economy through revenue generation. For instance, Japan is one of the leading economy in the world because of her functional economy which is attributed to high human capital resource of her youths. Secondly, innovation is the hallmark of adolescents and this propels the world’s economy. Stellar ideas that have changed the globe has been championed by youths. Examples are, the invention of Facebook by Mark Zuckerburg and Microsoft by Bill Gates when he was a youth.
In conclusion, while it is true that high number of young adults have their disadvantages in a society, I believe the advantages are too enormous to be overlooked
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1666.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30573248408 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89661893133 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614649681529 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 532.8 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.6932722603 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.0 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4285714286 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3571428571 7.06120827912 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0909337770613 0.244688304435 37% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0302483667199 0.084324248473 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0589325932705 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0787102582712 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0835838172893 0.056905535591 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.76 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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