You have just moved to a new apartment. Write a letter to your friend and say
- Why did you move?
- Describe your new home
- Invite him/her to your new place.
Dear Roya,
I hope you are doing well. I am writing to express how cheerful I felt about my new home and also, invite you to my place.
As you know, I got a scholarship from a highly reputed university for a P.hD position in Canada. It is about 2 months that I have moved to Ontario and from the next week I have to attend my classes and officially start my upcoming study.
To tell you about my home, I should say it is spectacular. It is a small apartment in the city center and located near the university. It has a big bedroom and a kitchen with a balcony overlooking a beautiful garden. I rent my place with all furniture such as sofa, table and other stuff.
I really appreciate it if you would accept my invitation for the next weekend. I know you are very busy with your job but I thought we could have some pastime with each other. We can just have dinner and spend some quality time to relieve the stress of a busy week.
I attached my location but please do not hesitate if you need further information regarded to the address.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Best Wishes,
Yalda.
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| 2020-07-21 | yaldaasgari | 73 | view |
| 2017-07-23 | jay.patel.4545 | 78 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Roya, I hope you are doing well. I am writing ...
^^^
Line 8, column 80, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ept my invitation for the next weekend. I know you are very busy with your job bu...
^
Line 12, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ward to hearing from you. Best Wishes, Yalda.
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, really, so, well, such as, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 907.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 209.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.33971291866 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44686207094 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.631578947368 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 289.8 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.191903226 44.8134815571 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 64.7857142857 76.5299724578 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9285714286 16.8248392259 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 4.34317383033 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238760440923 0.216113520407 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.069266835147 0.0766984524023 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0550094063344 0.0603063233224 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111063467452 0.12726935374 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0588787167117 0.0580467560999 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.5 8.37731958763 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.3 8.71597938144 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.13 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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