Some people think that environmental problems are too big for individuals to solve. Others believe individuals can also do some things to solve these problems. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
There are different views on the question of whether or not individuals have the ability to tackle environment problems. In my opinion, I would argue that despite the complexity of these issues, there are a range of actions that can be taken by individuals to address it.
Firstly, an indisputable fact that is a series of environment crises has widespread and cannot be resolved by one person or even a nation. An outstanding example is global warming cause by greenhouse gas emissions. Although the rooting factor has been identified, it is not simple to solve this problems because many wealthy countries have refused to reduce the amount of dioxide from industrial zones for fear of losing revenue. In other words, environment issues are certainly not easy for individuals to handle themselves.
However, I believe that each citizen of each country can help alleviate crises. Admittedly, the main cause of environment problems and global warming is human activities. Therefore, if each person modifies his or her behavior towards the environment, they will be able to solve these problems on their own. An example is that each individual can reduce the waste they throw every day by reusing and recycling. Using green products that bring less environmental downside is another suggestion for individuals.
In conclusion, I would like to reaffirm that every citizen of the world can only resolve environmental problems to some level, all we need is endeavor and willingness to save our planet.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 30, Rule ID: WHETHER[3]
Message: Wordiness: Shorten this phrase to the shortest possible suggestion.
Suggestion: whether; the question whether
There are different views on the question of whether or not individuals have the ability to ...
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Line 2, column 291, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...n identified, it is not simple to solve this problems because many wealthy countries...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, so, therefore, in conclusion, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1259.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 243.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18106995885 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90498837794 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.625514403292 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 401.4 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.365243059 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.916666667 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.25 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260673848649 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0787262837176 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.047110992254 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139742228431 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0284920643729 0.056905535591 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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