Nowadays more and more older people who are looking for work have to compete with younger people for the same jobs.
What problems does this cause?
What are some possible solutions?
In this day and age, the competition in finding a job between the elderly and young pp has become a significant concern. there are several results from this problem need being tackled by both the government and non-government sources of funds
there are two main issues have been caused from this competition. First of all, it is hard for senior citizens to get same types of work with younger pp. almost the company recruit staff who has high qualifications and wide knowledge. For instance, in this modern society, the technology is becoming developing everyday and pp are required to keep pace with this innovation. Obviously, the young generation has a wider savvy than oldies. they have an agile mind and the important thing is that youngsters can sit in the table and look at the screen for a long time but almost the aged can’t. Secondly, with the severe competition, young people might have to work under pressure. they would continuously change their jobs until they find it suitable. this phenomenon can cause several health and psychological problems such as stress and heart attack.
there are ways to deal these actions. New policies should be published to provide old pp with several social benefit; including unemployment benefit or annuity, medical service and social care should be distributed sparely in the country. individuals can support to improve these issues by organize training courses for old pp to help them practise technological using skills and have wider knowledge
In sum, the competition between old and young generation cause many problems; however, these actions can be tackled by different types of solutions by the government and individuals
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, for instance, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1443.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26642335766 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7674655703 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.624087591241 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 430.2 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 80.7846139197 49.4020404114 164% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.0 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0769230769 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.76923076923 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205514326159 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0676898427498 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0529289970979 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0999768291401 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0851547178223 0.056905535591 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.