Nowadays, food has become easier to prevent. Has this change improved the way people live? Use specfic reasons and examples to support your answer.
At the present time , cooking at home is considred to be immensely different from restaurants. Therefore,some people keen on dining out while others prefer to stay at home and cook for themselves.As for me,i would rather prepare food at home as opposed to going to food stands or restaurants.Eating in is both much healthier and has nutritional value and I will point out why in my essay.
Firstly,cooking at home is much healthier than eating out.For instance,when you want to cook something ,you make sure that the products are fresh .
On the contrary, restaurants do not provide fresh food .Sometimes they mix remained foods with fresh food in order to compensate their expenses. As a result, these foods can make people feel unhealthy.Thus,preparing food at home is much more beneficial to your health and it is the best choice for me.This is therefore one of the basic reasons I prefer eating in to eating out.
Secondly, I think food loses its nutritional value if it is cooked carelessly in a rushed manner rather than preparing food in a slower pace.So,the way I cook is more scrumptious and keeps its freshness for a long time.To illustrate, a restaurant will not cook food gently and because of this the food loses its vitamins which are vital to everbody’s health.I think that makes restaurant food disgusting.For this reason,consuming food at home is always a better option and has plenty of nutritional value.That is why I prefer preparing my meals at home to buying them.
To sum up,home food is both much healthier and nourishing than eating out all the time.Thus,I opt for eating the majority of my dishes at home and like this much better than eating in a restaurant.
I believe that I will keep on doing this way of life as long as I’m a living person.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, while, as for, for instance, i think, as a result, on the contrary, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1481.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83986928105 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14774192411 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.522875816993 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 449.1 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 38.0 20.2975951904 187% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 147.537283424 49.4020404114 299% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 185.125 106.682146367 174% => OK
Words per sentence: 38.25 20.7667163134 184% => OK
Discourse Markers: 17.0 7.06120827912 241% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 28.0 5.01903807615 558% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128057315732 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0664267173114 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0480850625626 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0767129680379 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0514061337059 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.5 13.0946893788 157% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.37 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.9 11.3001002004 150% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.2 10.1190380762 170% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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