Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged, others believe that children who are taught to cooperate rather than compete become useful adults.
Discuss both views and give your opinion
Some individuals believe that a competitive spirit should be inculcated into young people, while others are of the opinion that young ones who harmoniously unite rather than compete become responsible adult. This essay will discuss both views and support that instilling a spirit of oneness in youngster helps them to become responsible adult in the society.
On one hand, those who support contentious spirit among Children assume probably that it will enable them to have the strength and will to rise Beyond all odds.their reason for this is that, their main objective would be to remain the best irrespective of any perceived intimidation. interestingly, they also acknowledged the fact that probably such notion could breeds dangers such as; selfishness, discord thereby creating a sense of pride in the minds of children yet others who fail in their quest to remain the best overall succumbed to inferiority complex, self worthlessness and depression. For instance, in 2018, the Association For Good mental in south Africa estimated that at 5% out of 100 per cent of high school students fall into depression annually due to failed self expectation. this in instance apposite the above claim.
On the other hand, people who support the spirit of harmony believe probably that, it encourage interpersonal relationship in children. This is because youngsters work unitedly to reach a common goal admittedly, they achieve this by encouraging one another, sharing ideas and wishing others the best in all endeavours. This is exemplified by the recent interview conducted by the Nigerian Television Authority, a renown medical practitioners was question on the reason he trains upcoming health practitioners selflessly, he posited that the spirit of cooperation and team work was instilled in him from infancy thus, supporting the fact that, instilling a sense of cooperation in children makes them to become responsible adult in the society.
In conclusion, although it is debatable whether to support cooperation or contentious spirit in children, I believe that children should be encouraged to develop a sense of ones in order for them to be selfless adult in the society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, still, thus, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1842.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 345.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33913043478 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98743430139 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559420289855 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 563.4 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 20.2975951904 168% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 100.661263652 49.4020404114 204% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 184.2 106.682146367 173% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.5 20.7667163134 166% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.9 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.302964947287 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120748230866 0.084324248473 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103420006661 0.0667982634062 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.206135402593 0.151304729494 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0878598633541 0.056905535591 154% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.0 13.0946893788 160% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.97 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 11.3001002004 147% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.28 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.76 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.1190380762 154% => OK
text_standard: 21.0 10.7795591182 195% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.