A friends of yours is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first time this summer. He/she asked for your advice
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter
Explain why you think your friend would enjoy a camping holiday
Describe some possible disadvantages
Say whether you like to go camping with your friend this summer
Dear…,
I have heard that you would go camping holiday where I had gone last summer. It was the best camping I have ever gone in my life because I benefited from pleasant environment. Also, I enjoyed the spectacular view of mountains. Since you are really keen on climbing mountains, I am sure that you will spend some great time in this place. I will send some photos that I have taken from mountains and camping.
However, I faced some problems such as the quality of food that was served in the local restaurant. I suggest that you bring some cans and noodles under this circumstance. Meanwhile, I did not have access to the Internet. Therefore, my parents became worry because I could not talk with them.
I would like to say that I am willing to go camping with you for this summer. It would be perfect, if you accepted.
I am waiting for your answer.
Yours faithfully,
bahare
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, really, so, therefore, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 26.3917525773 61% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 734.0 937.175257732 78% => OK
No of words: 160.0 206.0 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.5875 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55655882008 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5495097568 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 127.690721649 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.625 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 223.2 290.88556701 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.2527541525 44.8134815571 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 56.4615384615 76.5299724578 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.3076923077 16.8248392259 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.30769230769 4.34317383033 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237231442866 0.216113520407 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0836824181194 0.0766984524023 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0794354970493 0.0603063233224 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145218101327 0.12726935374 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0699111388115 0.0580467560999 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.3 8.37731958763 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.45 8.71597938144 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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