Some people believe that the whole family (grandparents, uncles, aunts) bringing up children is better rather than only parents.
What is your opinion?
In the modern era, children brought up in nuclear families are more prevalent than those in joint families. Indeed, to my mind, there is convincing evidence that the upbringing of an offspring by the entire family is far beneficial than by only parents. In this essay, I shall examine how research in human psychology and sociological studies support this view.
To begin with, proper guidance by elders is essential as well as a fundamental factor in a child's overall growth. Due to a busy lifestyle, however, nowadays the negligence of working parents towards their descendants is increasing significantly. For instance, a recent Cambridge study shows that 60 percent of children in the US are left with caretakers or babysitters, while their biological parents spend most of their time working or socializing. Conversely, in joint families, the unavailability of parents does not harm a child's growth because of the presence of grandparents and their counseling.
Moreover, the dearth of emotional support during childhood results in failure of human relationships in their future, whereas, interaction with uncles, aunts, and cousins help youngsters acquire the skills of dealing with emotions. For example, according to psychological research, while the infants who spend their childhood alone or in a smaller family are ignorant, those who grow up in large families are patient and well-behaved. Thus, youngsters learn emotional as well as sociological skills from their elders in a joint family.
To conclude, for the overall personality development of children, from my perspective, upbringing by the whole family is far advantageous than by only parents, especially in today's world, when parents are more inclined towards earning their livelihood. In addition to this, to ensure the safety of an infant, nothing could be a substitute to own family.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
conversely, however, if, moreover, so, thus, well, whereas, while, for example, for instance, in addition, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1578.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42268041237 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06973465687 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584192439863 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 484.2 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.2660793972 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.5 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.25 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.06120827912 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14228697163 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.051333783211 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0545531324057 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0914608091958 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0397279803278 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.76 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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