You have recently moved to a different house.
Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter,
explain why you have moved
describe the new house
invite your friend to come and visit
Dear Eve,
I hope you are doing good. It has been quite a long time since we last met. I am writing today to let you know that I have shifted to a new house.
Since my company shifted my office to Bangalore, I had to relocate to this city. From the past 6 months, I was saving money to purchase a house for myself and now that I had adequate savings, I bought one in Bangalore.
It is a 3BHK flat on the thirteenth floor of a high-rise building in a well-structured society. Besides, the apartment has a south-west facing balcony, giving splendid sunset views. Also, it is fully-furnished with magnificent interiors. Moreover, a plethora of amenities in the society such as gymnasium, cricket ground, basketball ground as well as a swimming pool, makes it even more fascinating.
As you have always wanted to visit Bangalore, I suppose you should not miss any opportunity to visit this city and my new house. I would be really excited and pleased to host you and show you around the place.
Plan your trip soon and share with me the itinerary over the phone.
Best Regards,
Jas
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, if, moreover, really, so, well, i suppose, such as, you know, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 903.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 195.0 206.0 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.63076923077 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75564569003 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.676923076923 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 281.7 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.9933995325 44.8134815571 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.4615384615 76.5299724578 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 16.8248392259 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.69230769231 4.34317383033 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169744650435 0.216113520407 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0477986419277 0.0766984524023 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0647909724087 0.0603063233224 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0845354584029 0.12726935374 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0739283603526 0.0580467560999 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 8.37731958763 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.98 8.71597938144 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.21 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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