Some people think that the government is wasting money on the arts and that this money could be better spent elsewhere.
To what extent do you agree with this view?
As we know, everyone has their own believes and concerns. Some people think that distributing money on arts is a wastage of money. However, I can't entirely agree with this point of view. My opinion is that the government should have to finance in arts aspects. Every aspect has its significance, and the government should spend its funds evenly in all fields, including arts. Spending money on the arts field can boost the economic status of the country.
On the other hand, we can say that arts play an essential role in an individual life; because it also reflects the traditional picture and culture of a country. The historical buildings, old forts, and classic paintings are all the most significant pieces of the attraction for individuals. It also helps to increase tourism in the country; because peoples come from other states to visit all these kinds of historical places and things.
Nowadays, art is not limited to canvas painting, drawing, and craftwork; but, it also includes artists like singers, actors, theatres, etc. They have a huge fan following; in this way, it is also a good source of earning, which helps in the economic growth of a country.
Artists and art also play a vital role in daily life. After the hectic routine watching movies and cricket gives us energy and pleasure. We feel cordial. By engaging with painting and craftwork, children can develop their creative thinking. They can think more divergently. Children participate in many art and craft activities in the school. They make some unique crafts with waste materials like newspapers, disposable materials, etc. Antique pieces made from waste materials also increase the beauty of our houses.
At last, I sum up; government must distribute its funds on arts because every aspect has its contribution and importance towards the development and
progress of a country.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 143, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
... arts is a wastage of money. However, I cant entirely agree with this point of view....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1565.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09771986971 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68153958441 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592833876221 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.683180061 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.25 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.35 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.25 7.06120827912 32% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203033242287 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0612454786685 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0823149336456 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0855596958118 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0969674324495 0.056905535591 170% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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