Task 2: You are being sent on a one month work assignment in San Francisco, California.
You need a place to stay while you are there. Write a letter to the Maury Samson Real
Estate Agency. In your letter:
explain the situation verticles
describe the kind of accommodation you would like
provide the dates you will need it.
Dear Sir,
I am from India and work for a multinational corporation, with its Head Office at Mumbai
(Maharashtra). I shall be travelling to San Francisco in the first week of August 2020 as I
have been assigned with a month-long project from my employer which will be executed
from San Francisco. Hence, the purpose of writing this letter to you is that I am looking for
an accommodation in your town.
I prefer to stay in a working-women hostel near City Centre. I would appreciate an
independent accommodation as to me privacy is of utmost importance and my job demands
long hours of investment in terms of time. Also, please ensure that hostel room is on the
ground floor or maximum up to 4 th floor. I would request you to share the quotation of the
same at the earliest so that a timely decision can be taken.
To be precise, I shall be arriving at San Francisco on August 3 rd , 2020 and would be staying
there till September 5 th , 2020. So, I’ll be needing the stay for these dates. My return flight is
on 6 th September. Also, please see if food arrangements can also be made a part of the
commercial as I will be new to your place and may find it difficult to arrange for it. Besides,
time will also be a constraint because of my busy schedule.
I look forward for a prompt reply from your side.
Yours Sincerely,
Navpreet Kaur
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'accommodation'.
Suggestion: accommodation
...letter to you is that I am looking for an accommodation in your town. I prefer to stay in a w...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 31, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...king for an accommodation in your town. I prefer to stay in a working-women host...
^^^
Line 7, column 81, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'independent accommodation'.
Suggestion: independent accommodation
...el near City Centre. I would appreciate an independent accommodation as to me privacy is of utmost importanc...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 12, column 67, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...arriving at San Francisco on August 3 rd , 2020 and would be staying there till S...
^^
Line 13, column 26, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ld be staying there till September 5 th , 2020. So, I’ll be needing the stay for ...
^^
Line 13, column 44, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...re till September 5 th , 2020. So, I’ll be needing the stay for these dates. My return fli...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, hence, if, look, may, so, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.48453608247 200% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 4.92783505155 223% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 26.3917525773 136% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1122.0 937.175257732 120% => OK
No of words: 249.0 206.0 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.50602409639 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76899595768 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 127.690721649 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610441767068 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 333.0 290.88556701 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.7555925738 44.8134815571 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.3076923077 76.5299724578 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1538461538 16.8248392259 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.07692307692 4.34317383033 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 16.0 4.29896907216 372% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194229976966 0.216113520407 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0617400214561 0.0766984524023 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0563779662968 0.0603063233224 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0593799080953 0.12726935374 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.055297129929 0.0580467560999 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 8.37731958763 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 70.7449484536 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.88 8.71597938144 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 41.2886597938 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 8.62886597938 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.