In education and employment, some people work harder than others. Why do some people work harder? Is it always a good thing to work hard?
It is true that there are people who are more diligent in their study and work compared with other members in society. While I acknowledge the benefits one can reap from being hardworking, I believe the drawbacks outweigh the advantages.
There are certain key reasons for working and studying hard. First, by putting strenuous effort on their work, they are gradually getting closer to their goals. For example, a worker who always meet his deadlines would be more likely to get promoted to high positions than the ones who do not. Moreover, people who persevere and strive hard for success can take pride in themselves for always trying their best and making the most out of their lives. Finally, there are people who are very passionate about their work. They are doing it simply because they enjoy the process and the interesting experiences they have while working.
However, the shortcomings of constant hard work are far more serious. The primary disadvantage is that it may negatively affect people’s health. Working extra shifts or studying late at night, they all have adverse impact on health, not to mention the pressure that heavy workloads put on people could cause them mental issues like stress and anxiety. In addition, people who are immersed in work all the time cannot maintain a work-life balance. They do not have the time needed to care about their relationships and even themselves, therefore, they live a lonely and tedious life. Clearly, there is no point pushing ourselves too hard if we could worsen our health, our relationships and our lives.
To sum up, working hard is advantageous as it helps us realize our dreams and fulfill our desires, however, these cannot make up for our health, time and happiness. In my view, it is best to set boundaries on our workload and manage our tasks efficiently, so that we can be productive and in the same time, well-being.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, well, while, for example, in addition, in my view, it is true, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 24.0651302605 179% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1583.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93146417445 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57498072091 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598130841121 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 479.7 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.8176828263 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.9375 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0625 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.1875 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229673849235 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0908435328992 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0719669201976 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137602609589 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0578151474218 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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