Do you agree or disagree with the following statement:
In twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today.
It is very difficult to predict what will happen in the future. When we talk about technologies or improvments, it is hard to explain how the world’s changes will affect our lives. Due to an important environmental issue, maybe in the next years we will realize that cars are decreasing. But, I believe that the number of vehicles is getting higher every decade and will not be fewer than today. Since humans have a extreme love about motor vehicles, with the development of eletrical cars, or the problems that a poor country has with public transportation, I really trust that cars’ use will not decrease.
Firstly, when the first motor vehicles was developed, the human being passion started. It is hard to explain, but cars can transfer almost a love feeling specially in men. Absolutely the new technologies or the modern designs have the hability to produce a magical sensation which forces us to get the newst model. Additionally, cars’ companies have a tremendous power to produce the best adversitments.
Secondly, respecting the environmental problems, many companies developed electrical cars in the past years. Looking for a better air for humanity, enginneers found a way to put good batteries to achieve the same power without producing any polution. Honestly, I believe that they got the best way to promote this kind of business.
Thirdly, as we can see in poor countries as Brazil, India, or Congo, the public transportation is not reliable. Thousands of people need to use buses or trains every day, but they never know what time it will be at the station and if it is safe or not.
To conclude, the discussion about cars and their environmental polution still have many chapters. Observing a comportamental human behavior, the last good improvments in technology, and different issues with public transportation, I think that cars are countinuosly increasing in the future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, honestly, if, look, may, really, second, secondly, so, still, third, thirdly, i think, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 43.0788530466 56% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 52.1666666667 63% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1598.0 1977.66487455 81% => OK
No of words: 313.0 407.700716846 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1054313099 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99417788474 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 212.727598566 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.597444089457 0.524837075471 114% => OK
syllable_count: 489.6 618.680645161 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.3017175197 48.9658058833 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.875 100.406767564 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5625 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.1875 5.45110844103 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199805250649 0.236089414692 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0574586005428 0.076458572812 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0566553613721 0.0737576698707 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0941047173002 0.150856017488 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0797107548882 0.0645574589148 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 10.9000537634 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 86.8835125448 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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