This graph shows that there is an equal amount of participation in women's sports compared to men and we still can't have equality in sports.
Given is the bar chart illustrating a certain striking difference between the amount of participation in women's sports and men's sports during the period of time from 1971 to 2011 (information taken from USC & Purdue sociologists 20-year studying). Overall, there is an upward trend in college female athletes throughout the period of time while the number of college male athletes fluctuate, in addition, the number of men athletes and the number of women athletes both reached a peak in the period of 2010-2011.
In terms of female athletes, the number climbed significantly from 1971 to 1986. In the period of 1976-1977, the number of participants was two times higher than that in the period of 1971-1973. After slowing down the speed of rising (from 1987 to 1992), the number continued increasing considerably from 1996. From 2001 to 2011 this number experienced another remarkable increase and jump over the limit of 150,000. In terms of male athletes, after a fluctuation had been witnessed during the period from 1971 to 1992, this number of participation went up gradually from 1992 to 2011. However, the male participants each period was higher than 150,000.
In conclusion, although there were fluctuations in the number of male participation, this number each period of the year was still higher than 150,000. It's interesting to note that men seem to be more interested in sports than women.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, still, while, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 33.7804878049 157% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1173.0 965.302439024 122% => OK
No of words: 229.0 196.424390244 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12227074236 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84967082635 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 106.607317073 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.502183406114 0.547539520022 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 327.6 283.868780488 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 3.36585365854 238% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.2944101742 43.030603864 152% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.3 112.824112599 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9 22.9334400587 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.7 5.23603664747 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 3.70975609756 243% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126505734306 0.215688989381 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0564503042402 0.103423049105 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.055870674657 0.0843802449381 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105532780649 0.15604864568 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0452664404833 0.0819641961636 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.2329268293 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 61.2550243902 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 11.4140731707 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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