Many modern children spend a great deal of time sitting in front of television or computer screen . This is extremely harmful to their development. Therefore parents should strictly limit the time children spend in this way
People of the world has to thank technology for it's immense contribution on various fields. The definition of the entertainment has changed a lot when it is compared to the one a decade ago. Pros and cons for the excessive usage of internet is discussed below before giving the final verdict.
There is no doubt that screens has become electronic babysitters of modern generation. This is because of the knowledge and entertainment it offers looks promising to them. For instance, the projects were done at much ease with the help of cyberspace. Also, virtual gaming and it's effects are breathtakingly amazing so it is impossible for any child to go away from it. In addition, teenagers are extremely interested in world wide web for virtual friendships and relationships which makes the real world so boring.
Infact, Parents should take their head out of sand and attend to the needs of their children no matter how busy they are in their professional life. Most importantly, they should warn them about the internet bullies and how they abduct their private matters. Along with this, parents should make them understand the importance of face to face interaction through which we can judge their looks, body language and facial expressions to know whom to avoid. Additionally, children should be taught about their physical fitness and development of body which encourages them to opt for the outdoor games.
In my opinion, it is impossible to avoid the internet because it is the future and children can't grow in their careers without knowledge of it, so the parents supervision is needed while using web. They should keep the timetable of when to use and encourage them to play outdoors. Similarly, children need to understand sitting before screens for long time may cause dry eyes, posture problems and various health issues.
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- Many modern children spend a great deal of time sitting in front of television or computer screen This is extremely harmful to their development Therefore parents should strictly limit the time children spend in this way 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 93, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...t because it is the future and children cant grow in their careers without knowledge...
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Line 7, column 152, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'parents'' or 'parent's'?
Suggestion: parents'; parent's
...careers without knowledge of it, so the parents supervision is needed while using web. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, may, similarly, so, while, as to, for instance, in addition, no doubt, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1538.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05921052632 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75530682869 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598684210526 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 466.2 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.6740405761 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.533333333 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2666666667 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175498646895 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0517486553988 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0489249103062 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.090703685867 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0672530700379 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.