In many parts of the world there are now more multi-generational households, e.g. where grandparents live with parents and children, than in the past. What do you think are the reasons for this?
Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
In today's circumstances, the significance of age in marriage life amid communality is becoming such a polemic plight that numerous people can hardly reach an absolute consensus. Furthermore, there exist disputation for a considerable space in time as to whether the minimum age of 21 can be both appropriate and warrantable for individuals to enter into marriage. As far as I am concerned, considering the age of people is deemed is a crucial factor in terms of marriage life.
Unequivocally, the significance of age is the vital substratum in terms of dwelling with full of happiness and joy. Regarding social standpoint, an elevating number of individuals corroborate that age of people contribute to comprehend the real meaning of life since more young families are becoming inclined to divorce within several months and years after their marriage. Hence, it is vitally acknowledged fact that the people are enlightened about enduring the life difficulties they confronted during their marriage life providing that they aged well above 21 years old.
Nevertheless, there are some people who prioritize espouse in their teen times on ground that they would like to stay ahead of life. However, this judgement can generate some adverse ramifications on both individual and communal life. Categorically, it may be an arduous procedure for some youngsters to adapt the atmosphere of the marriage life and they may experience to build up solid relationships in the family. In particular, more people are not capable of maintaining an equilibrium between family relationships and their commitments.
In final analysis, although it is a quite ubiquitous to marry in early age, I accentuate that it can be more successful marrying after the year of 21 since people can feel responsibility for the preservation of marriage. Moreover, people aged over 21 can obtain adequate empirical knowledge concerning the marriage during their student life or their challenging moments in relation to teenagers.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 249, Rule ID: WHETHER[6]
Message: Can you shorten this phrase to just 'whether', or rephrase the sentence to avoid "as to"?
Suggestion: whether
...tation for a considerable space in time as to whether the minimum age of 21 can be both appro...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, regarding, so, well, as to, in particular
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1686.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.36942675159 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1964433661 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56050955414 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 552.6 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 46.3408267322 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.5 106.682146367 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1666666667 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0394167410715 0.244688304435 16% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0189212896108 0.084324248473 22% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0217463869106 0.0667982634062 33% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0267037810884 0.151304729494 18% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0119286658108 0.056905535591 21% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.0946893788 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 28.17 50.2224549098 56% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.6 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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