True success lies in rejecting the familiar things.
success is generally what every individual compete for in life but it comes with taking your stand, refusing the norm and going for unfamiliar things. does success has a price? Many people who have gotten the goods of life can say that they really gave up the known world for them to attain the apogee of success. Hence, I completely agree that success lies in rejecting the familiar things and I will disscuss my views carefully.
Firstly, today most people have driven themselves to great heights gradually by simply concentrating on things unknown. one can never be fully motivated by just focusing on the casual. Full motivation is often brought about when one's take focus off the known. I will quickly share an example of a young man called Ben Carson whose mother (Sonya) never gave up on by consistently giving him tasks that he was not familiar with even though he complained bitterly, however, he giot familiar with the unfamiliar and he is now listed among the world's best neurosurgeons. In addition, taking a position outside the things that appealed to him helped him in getting to the very top.
Secondly, majority have been given the opportunity to make the world a better place. Lots of advancement in science and technology have been clearly brought about by different spot on researches. Discoveries have been made in major sectors like health, energy, engineering and so on which are recorded as ground breaking successes because different people took a firm position as regards relating with things that are not familiar.
Thirdly, it might be said that staying with the familiar can bring success which may be true to some certain extent but it does not create room for improvement rather it places a person in a spot for couple of years. Bigger things, unfamiliar things will always bring motivation to be successful which should not be over looked.
Based on the above mentioned reasons, it is definitely true that true success lies in rejecting the norm even though it may look unwise and involved at first but one can be sure that one is in the right track. The price to pay for success is always going away from the familiar.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, look, may, really, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, as regards, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 33.0505617978 88% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 58.6224719101 84% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1787.0 2235.4752809 80% => OK
No of words: 370.0 442.535393258 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82972972973 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38581623665 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.502861766 2.79657885939 89% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 215.323595506 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575675675676 0.4932671777 117% => OK
syllable_count: 546.3 704.065955056 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.0984133086 60.3974514979 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.6875 118.986275619 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.125 23.4991977007 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5625 5.21951772744 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.331270722556 0.243740707755 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100578263291 0.0831039109588 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105575672261 0.0758088955206 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183660268597 0.150359130593 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0937098705316 0.0667264976115 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 14.1392134831 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 48.8420337079 116% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.03 12.1639044944 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.38706741573 95% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 100.480337079 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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