"Manned space flight is costly and dangerous. Moreover, the recent success of a series of unmanned space probes and satellites has demonstrated that a great deal of useful information can be gathered without the costs and risks associated with sending men and women into space. Therefore, we should invest our resources in unmanned space flight."
Virtually it has been seen that investing in unmanned space flight will be very prudent usages of our resources due to it's less expensive risk free criteria but here this claim based on some foolhardy assumptions fails to consider some important factors, such as the plausibility of the information gathered by the satellites and how much these information will be convincing to the the investor.
The argument is claiming the future success probability based on their previous success of unmanned series but who knows about the future perfectly.In future manned space flight may outstrip the unmanned flight in gathering information. While it is saying that unmanned space flight is cost effective and manned space flight requires more resources but in future, scientist may invent some alternate ways to reduce the cost at the same time risk also. They might be equal or in some cases less than unmanned space flight. In unmanned space flight there may be extra features and extra robotic automated equipment required to gather authentic information that may exceed the cost of manned space flight where these extra features no longer needed cause those tasks can be done by human. Moreover while staying in the space if any part of the flight goes dysfunctional or any kind of deviation occurs , experts human being can immediately fix and these will be extra benefit.
The argument is overlooking very important , may be most important factor that is the plausibility of the information and human experience. Naturally investor will be agog to human experience and always manned space flight is more discussed than those of unmanned flight. For example , many countries including Russia , India, China attempted to send space flight to moon but people in general are shows much alacrity about the USA's mission in which human first walked on the moon surface.
Moreover, people may be skeptical about the data and information gathered by satellites and space probes. Sometimes they may think that these data are deliberation generated to make people astound and attract investors to invest on their unmanned space flight mission.
Argument is also claiming that their recent gathering of data by unmanned project is successful but they are not doing any comparison with the respective manned space flight.Perhaps they are exaggerating about their result to attract investor. It may also happen that the data and information gathered by human will be much more us
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Comments
e-rater score report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.5 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 13 15
No. of Words: 400 350
No. of Characters: 2040 1500
No. of Different Words: 188 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.472 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.1 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.551 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 146 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 101 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 83 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 52 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 30.769 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 13.633 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.923 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.425 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.425 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.152 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 1 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 340, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this information' or 'these informations'?
Suggestion: this information; these informations
...gathered by the satellites and how much these information will be convincing to the the investor....
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Line 2, column 380, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
...these information will be convincing to the the investor. The argument is claiming the...
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Line 2, column 380, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
...these information will be convincing to the the investor. The argument is claiming the...
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Line 3, column 148, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
...ut who knows about the future perfectly.In future manned space flight may outstrip...
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Line 3, column 353, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...pace flight requires more resources but in future, scientist may invent some alternate wa...
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Line 3, column 446, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...o reduce the cost at the same time risk also. They might be equal or in some cases l...
^^^^
Line 3, column 786, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
...cause those tasks can be done by human. Moreover while staying in the space if any part ...
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Line 3, column 898, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...nctional or any kind of deviation occurs , experts human being can immediately fix...
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Line 4, column 43, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...e argument is overlooking very important , may be most important factor that is th...
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Line 4, column 283, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...an those of unmanned flight. For example , many countries including Russia , India...
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Line 4, column 317, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...xample , many countries including Russia , India, China attempted to send space fl...
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Line 6, column 174, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Perhaps
...with the respective manned space flight.Perhaps they are exaggerating about their resul...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, may, moreover, so, then, while, for example, in general, kind of, such as, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 19.6327345309 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.9520958084 124% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 11.1786427146 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 13.6137724551 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 28.8173652695 97% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 55.5748502994 79% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 16.3942115768 91% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2070.0 2260.96107784 92% => OK
No of words: 398.0 441.139720559 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20100502513 5.12650576532 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46653527281 4.56307096286 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66158459821 2.78398813304 96% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 204.123752495 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.482412060302 0.468620217663 103% => OK
syllable_count: 654.3 705.55239521 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.96107784431 40% => OK
Article: 2.0 8.76447105788 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.70958083832 37% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.22255489022 47% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 19.7664670659 66% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 22.8473053892 131% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 84.7217513271 57.8364921388 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 159.230769231 119.503703932 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.6153846154 23.324526521 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.92307692308 5.70786347227 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.25449101796 228% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.20758483034 73% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 6.88822355289 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.67664670659 64% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.361220381308 0.218282227539 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.147864627664 0.0743258471296 199% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0588842266879 0.0701772020484 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200776231407 0.128457276422 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0766708388002 0.0628817314937 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.4 14.3799401198 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 48.3550499002 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 12.197005988 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.5979740519 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.32208582834 109% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 98.500998004 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 28.5 12.3882235529 230% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 14.0 11.1389221557 126% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.9071856287 118% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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