The leisure industry is growing rapidly. The active role of modern technology in people’s lives nowadays made them less creative. Do you agree or disagree?
The 21st century has witnessed the leisure market as one of the fastest growing industries, thanks to the advancement of technology. Nevertheless, there is a general consensus that the active role of modern technology has spoiled our generation and impeded our creativity. Supported by many well-grounded reasons, the author’s belief, however, has never coincided with such stance.
First of all, it is unreasonable to conclude that today’s entertainment is simpler and less challenging than before. Not long ago when people used to play games that require little brainstorming effort such as cards and chess, it was out of the reach of their expectation that games will evolve much rapidly and tremendously later. Nowadays, technological inventions such as computers have allowed games to be much more complicated, requiring a decent combination of great skills, knowledge and creativity to form an appropriate playing strategy. modern computer games have, thus, transformed into a valuable tool that trains people’s mind to be more creative and sophisticated.
Secondly, some people argue that the ubiquity of entertainment devices and its harmful by-products such as sedentary lifestyles will turn watchers into monotonous and mechanical entertainment seekers. however, this view is flawed as these cases, though admittedly exist, are often isolated events that should not be generalized. On the contrary, televisions, for example, are increasingly used as a common educational device that is widely used in kindergartens and schools to facilitate young minds’ development of knowledge and imagination, two precursors to creativity.
What have been discussed above refutes a prevailing notion that modern technologies stifle people’s creativity and make them passive and bland entertainment seekers. Latest technologies have, in fact, made people more creative and knowledgeable.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, thus, well, for example, in fact, such as, first of all, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1626.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.84892086331 5.12529762239 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.26013606132 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.658273381295 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 501.3 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.671518023 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.5 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1666666667 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6666666667 7.06120827912 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191938945343 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0665103390623 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.060476094947 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112943086822 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0705642346311 0.056905535591 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.7 13.0946893788 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.21 50.2224549098 62% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.95 12.4159519038 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.34 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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