Write a letter to your friend. You have borrowed something from him and i got damaged.
1.Apology for damagig it
2. What happened
3 say how you are going to fix the issue
Dear Brijesh,
I am writing this letter to say sorry for the damage of your brand new laptop that I have borrowed from you yesterday. Believe me, although I’ve taken good care, the situation was out of my control.
Let me explain the situation at length. Actually, yesterday only I’ve asked you to provide your laptop to prepare presentation for final submission for university exams. After completion the project at late night, I have kept laptop in charging. Owing to tiredness of whole day, I slept and laptop was plugging for the whole night. Unfortunately, when I tried to switch it on today morning, the laptop screen was totally blank. So I think something wrong happened due to overcharging.
I’m a technophobe person, so to get it back to its normal situation, I have already talked with one of my friends who have his own business of computer sales and repairing. I will meet him at earliest and resolve the issue of your laptop and hand over it.
Really I am feeling regret about the situation but hope you will forgive me.
Warm wishes,
Nirav
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 377, Rule ID: TODAY_MORNING[1]
Message: This is a non-standard collocation. Normally, 'this morning' is used.
Suggestion: this morning
...rtunately, when I tried to switch it on today morning, the laptop screen was totally blank. S...
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Line 11, column 6, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... will forgive me. Warm wishes, Nirav
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, really, so, as to, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 895.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 185.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83783783784 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60170197707 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.686486486486 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 270.9 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.7263905704 44.8134815571 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.5833333333 76.5299724578 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4166666667 16.8248392259 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.41666666667 4.34317383033 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238146474646 0.216113520407 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0710366031457 0.0766984524023 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0926974681771 0.0603063233224 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137035117159 0.12726935374 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0751954729999 0.0580467560999 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 8.37731958763 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 8.71597938144 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.