Giving pocket money to children is very common in many countries. To what extend do you agree and disagree?
Childhood is one of the best times of a person’s life tremendously. So, taking money to develop itself is essential to some extent. Now I would like to concentrate on both views according to my supporting argument and then I will write the conclusion.
Advocates of this believe that, some juveniles are paramount intelligent as well as clever. They are taking extra money from their guardians and sometimes they are spending it to worst contents or unproductive sectors. In my view, this tendency is harmful for his future as it can divert, and he could be misleading somehow. In this reason, nowadays rowdy youngsters are committing with an illegal job such as murder, rape, assault and so much unlawful occupation. For instance, many studies have constantly found that, crimes involved by adolescent, were linked to pocket-money. Hence, I would say, regularly getting pocket-money could be increase disordering to some extent.
On the other hand, despite the aforementioned disadvantage, it has many positives as well. I think, if parent gives proper nurture by splendid parenting to their offspring definitely will not be dishonest/third-rate. In my experience, every mom and dad intents to give money because, it could be helpful for their child suddenly. When I was younger, we were no come from the rich family although my mom would always give me extra money and truly, I would used to hoard that money apart from expenses. Consequently, I prefer to give scholarship to my children and I always take care them nicely, till to date they are good going.
To sum up, considering everything, donating pocket-money is not only requisite but also crucial from the family but young people should spend it on the special occasion or save. On that way, particularly they will learn how to control the pace of money.
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Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'use'
Suggestion: use
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, hence, if, so, then, third, well, apart from, for instance, i think, such as, as well as, in my view, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1521.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05315614618 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01479594711 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.647840531561 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 479.7 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.4322187413 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.0625 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8125 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.6875 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142305732412 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0437405502445 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0350714206789 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0789956790256 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0359913945587 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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