Should old people live with the family or separately with same-aged people? Discuss both the views.
It is argued among the masses whether senior citizens should spend their last phase of life with their near and dear ones or with their peers of the same age. The majority of elderly people support the approach of living their retired life with their family members only and reasons for the same are illustrated below with strong examples.
On the one hand, indeed the old age period is as vulnerable as childhood which requires the same amount of care to look after them. Therefore, they believe that by living together with their grandchildren and children, they able to get an abundant load of love and attention that gives them warm and secure feelings. Hence, this emotional attachment devotes them more happiness which makes them far away from mentally stressed disease. For example, one of the surveys in psychology article reveals that after retirement, people who accommodated in a joint family are found much happier than the one who lives with their peers.
On the other hand, many aged people want to enjoy their freedom and like to spend the same period with the people of their age at their fad age. As they had spent their majority of the aging period in socializing and professional life, they not able to enjoy their privacy of life. Hence, they preferred to live with peers at their last stage of life. For instance, it was published in times that in metro-cities seventy percent of retired persons choose to live in old aged houses with the same age people rather than giving preference to their families.
In conclusion, I believe that old aged people should be given more love and sympathy the same as children. By living together with their inheritor they can not only relish their last phase of life but also earned enough attention.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, look, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1459.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81518151815 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31687869594 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.528052805281 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 458.1 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 37.7399729141 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.583333333 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.25 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.339041972639 0.244688304435 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.151865157548 0.084324248473 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0931332871238 0.0667982634062 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.246824467278 0.151304729494 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0439326127537 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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