Computers are often argued to be the most important invention of the last hundred years. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
There have been debates about whether computers are the most impactful invention in the last few decades. Personally, I strongly agree with this view.
Firstly, computers serve as a bridge for us to connect to the outer world. People can now easily access the information for almost anything, whether it is art, music, books or footage of historical events. In the past, in order to gather information about a specific topic, the sole way was through a library and hopelessly searched through endless piles of books, and it could be quite stressful at times. However, in the digital age, it is as simple as typing a keyword into an online encyclopedia like Wikipedia. Computers have solved the problem of preserving, organizing and sharing pieces of historical and cultural beauty.
Secondly, computers have been revolutionizing many aspects of the world. We can all agree that the first Industrial Revolution changed our lives forever, and so did the third, and the upcoming fourth Industrial Revolution. Those machines, with complete precision and the ability to work days after days, months after months, can be intergrated in various fields. Computers appear in every part of the process, whether it is quality control, controlling the mass production queue, logistics, sales and even customer care. The importance of computers gave birth to a new job called programmers and eventually the technology industry, which demand a large number of high-skilled workers and has no sign of decreasing. In short, all people can greatly benefit from the development of computers.
In conclusion, computers have completely changed our lives for the better, and people should be more open-minded to accept such technological advances.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 646, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...y the technology industry, which demand a large number of high-skilled workers and has no sign of...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, third, in conclusion, in short
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1462.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33576642336 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89515221274 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.653284671533 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.6699917536 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.428571429 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5714285714 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.78571428571 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126614753179 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0431008652532 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0343398777688 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0868091596155 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.045958072508 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.48 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.