Some people believe that it is a good idea to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
People have different views about whether researchers or businessmen should share their knowledge in the academic field or whether some data is too critical or too precious to be released in public. While I understand that some information owners are reluctant to share freely, I believe that that the benefits of sharing do outweigh the drawbacks.
There are various reasons why people might argue that it is not proper to release without any restrictions. Firstly, it is so dangerous if the information is misused. For example, if data scientists open the database of membership of the website, that would invade the privacy of customers who enrolls on the internet. Secondly, the business need to make money so they would not let the information use freely. Besides, because the company puts a lot of effort and cost on research for inventing the product, it is indeed to charge some fee for the intangible knowledge or physical produce. Finally, some information stands for the brand value, and it is unique. If everyone knows the data about the company, the special points of the business are no longer existing.
In spite of the above arguments, I support the view that opening the information to everyone will make the world better. The opportunity of accessing the knowledge can lead to fast improvement and make the research have a big progress. For instance, sharing the method about how to produce medicine worldwide can result in reduce death rate in COVID-19. In my view, free data would bring brainstorms in crowd, and that actually can bring more new and novel ideas.
In conclusion, particular information may not be proper to share everyone, but I believe some open data would led the society to a more brilliant place.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 289, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: that
...re reluctant to share freely, I believe that that the benefits of sharing do outweigh the...
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Line 5, column 221, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'big progress'.
Suggestion: big progress
... improvement and make the research have a big progress. For instance, sharing the method about...
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Line 7, column 111, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'lead'
Suggestion: lead
...one, but I believe some open data would led the society to a more brilliant place. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, besides, but, finally, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in my view, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1459.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01374570447 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7241475571 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.563573883162 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 462.6 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.7526860782 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.214285714 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7857142857 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8571428571 7.06120827912 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.300327290051 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0924649958598 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.084002570754 0.0667982634062 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196020869671 0.151304729494 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107136050707 0.056905535591 188% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.