A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
School studies are highly crucial role for the overall development of the student. Schooling plays a foundational role in deciding the overall development of the student. Although nation ought to have an equivalent right like state or school to decide the curriculum, I feel it should purely depend on student himself/herself to decide what he wants to study. Nation should provide eclectic cources for the students, and student on the basis of their liking should select the curriculum but standards of the courses should be equal. But student may be too naiive to decide what is the correct path for him/her; in that case, parents should meticulously concentrate on selecting the curriculum of the child. It may happen parents too are ambiguous in selecting a right career path for the child.
Having a rigid and equal curriculum across all the states is to be taken care by the national board. A student from a state may decide to change his/her state for higher studies, it will be difficult for the latter state to evaluate the students abilities and caliber. In this case, it is important to have same national curriculum throughout the country.
Having similar curriculum throughout the country maintains and adheres to uniformity among the new generation of the country. It may happen one state may have a rigorous curriculum for studies and an another state may have a bit sports oriented curriculum. In that case, for a parent or the child himself/herself, it will be difficult to decide which way to go, provided the measure standards are different. If we can have one team or a group of people to measure the standard of the eduation among the states, that too would be helpful for the aspiring students in deciding.
Also, for colleges to decide to which students they want to grant admission, it is important to have a uniform curriculum among the students; it will be quite easier in that case. If a student from a different state comes to their college, it will be difficult for the college to decide whether to grant admission or not. Moreover, college should take care about the justice done to other students applying for admission.
Schooling standards also should be uniform among the states of a country. Because one state might have an open book test and other state is very stringent about conducting tests, this will be unfair to students of the latter state. Schooling fees also should be more or less uniform among the states of the country, but that depends on the financial capabilities of the family of the student.
I believe we should have a uniform curriculum among the states of the country, nation should take over the authority to decide the curriculum of the student, provided nation has conducted of detailed study of the suggestions made by the states. This will do justice to all the students of the society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 197, Rule ID: AN_ANOTHER[1]
Message: One of these determiners is redundant in this context. Choose only one: 'a state' or 'another state'.
Suggestion: a state; another state
...e a rigorous curriculum for studies and an another state may have a bit sports oriented curricul...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, moreover, so, i feel, more or less
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 26.0 12.4196629213 209% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 33.0505617978 100% => OK
Preposition: 71.0 58.6224719101 121% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2371.0 2235.4752809 106% => OK
No of words: 485.0 442.535393258 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88865979381 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.69283662038 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6821358456 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 215.323595506 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.412371134021 0.4932671777 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 747.0 704.065955056 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 6.24550561798 208% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.4958486919 60.3974514979 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.904761905 118.986275619 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0952380952 23.4991977007 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.57142857143 5.21951772744 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245383572839 0.243740707755 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0960740804043 0.0831039109588 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0758962299398 0.0758088955206 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16381499524 0.150359130593 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0894575092694 0.0667264976115 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 14.1392134831 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 48.8420337079 116% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 12.1639044944 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 8.38706741573 93% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 100.480337079 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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