Cambridge 5 Test1
The line graph illustates the precentage of inhabitant aged 65 and above in Japan,Sweden,and USA between the time periode of 1940 and 2040. The prediction over 100 years the proportion of old people in each countries will increase countinously every year.
In early 1940,Japan had 5% for unproductive peopel than decresed under 5% from 1940 to 2000. Sweden showed a pattern of growth, it inclined rapidly in a period of time than become stable before continued the number of rising. USA had highest portion for 40 years since 1940 until 2000.
Different trend will show in 2040, Japan chage USA place who has higest upper 65 ages in society about 25% of all population,Sweden take the second level and USA at the last position.Allmost developed countries will fullfil by more than 20% of people adged 65 and more in 2040.
It is all my explanation of demograpy unproductive people in certain countries.
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Sentence: The prediction over 100 years the proportion of old people in each countries will increase countinously every year.
Description: A determiner/pronoun, singular is not usually followed by a noun, plural, common
Suggestion: Refer to each and countries
Sentence: Different trend will show in 2040, Japan chage USA place who has higest upper 65 ages in society about 25 of all population,Sweden take the second level and USA at the last position.
Description: The fragment Sweden take the is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace take with verb, past tense
Sentence: It is all my explanation of demograpy unproductive people in certain countries.
Description: A noun, singular, common is not usually followed by an adjective
Suggestion: Refer to demograpy and unproductive
Sentence: The line graph illustates the precentage of inhabitant aged 65 and above in Japan,Sweden,and USA between the time periode of 1940 and 2040.
Error: periode Suggestion: period
Error: precentage Suggestion: percentage
Error: illustates Suggestion: illustrates
Sentence: The prediction over 100 years the proportion of old people in each countries will increase countinously every year.
Error: countinously Suggestion: continuously
Sentence: In early 1940,Japan had 5 for unproductive peopel than decresed under 5 from 1940 to 2000.
Error: decresed Suggestion: decreased
Error: peopel Suggestion: people
Sentence: Different trend will show in 2040, Japan chage USA place who has higest upper 65 ages in society about 25 of all population,Sweden take the second level and USA at the last position.Allmost developed countries will fullfil by more than 20 of people adged 65 and more in 2040.
Error: chage Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: adged Suggestion: added
Error: higest Suggestion: highest
Error: fullfil Suggestion: fulfill
Sentence: It is all my explanation of demograpy unproductive people in certain countries.
Error: unproductive Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: demograpy Suggestion: democracy
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 4.5 out of 9
Category: Poor Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 3 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 11 2
No. of Sentences: 7 10
No. of Words: 157 200
No. of Characters: 730 1000
No. of Different Words: 101 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.54 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.65 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.511 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 48 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 31 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 21 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 17 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 22.429 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 12.602 7.5
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Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.424 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.747 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.034 0.07
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