Write a letter to the organiser of an annual festival that you attended last year. Include
- Feedback about last year
- An offer to volunteer
- Questions about the festival
Dear Mr Brown,
I am writing to express my gratitude to your organisation of Octoberfest last year. I have received a great pleasure attending it. Especially, I was thrilled by the opportunity to cook fried meat on my own using the grills that you provided free of charge for participants. Even though I am into beer myself, such a wide variety of craft beer was great and my husband enjoyed it a lot. Personally, I have tasted a cherry beer first time and was pleasantly surprised.
By the way, I would like to help you with the conduction of Octoberfest as I noticed that there were not enough waiters during the celebration. I guess everyone just wanted to chill out and take a rest. That is why I think that an extra pair of hands will be useful and I will be glad to suggest my free help in the Fest.
Frankly speaking, we liked the festival so much that we are planning to visit it next year. Could you please be so kind to give me some information about it? When and what location will the October west be conducted? Will it possible to stay in the camp like the previous year? Should we bring our own costumes or will they be available for the rent at the festival?
Thank you in advance for your kind attention to this matter.
Sincerely yours,
Maria V
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| 2020-08-24 | Mariamirabella | 89 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, frankly, so, i guess, i think, by the way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1044.0 937.175257732 111% => OK
No of words: 235.0 206.0 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.44255319149 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55275173518 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 127.690721649 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.642553191489 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 316.8 290.88556701 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.5429409696 44.8134815571 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.6 76.5299724578 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6666666667 16.8248392259 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.2 4.34317383033 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 7.41237113402 175% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160531760004 0.216113520407 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.044085622635 0.0766984524023 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0490510456335 0.0603063233224 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0738827251858 0.12726935374 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0397754546035 0.0580467560999 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.3 8.37731958763 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.18 8.71597938144 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.2 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.