Q Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children

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Q: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?

Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children.

Our future should always be better than our past. if we compare our era with past decades we will come to know how comfortably we all are living now a days. so, I completely agree with the statement that living today is more comfortable and easier than our grandparents generation. In this essay, I intend to delve into various reasons that support my opinion.
Firstly, the comfort of cars, planes and other transport modes we have today were not available in that generation. Only rich had fortune to buy a car, others used to travel inside wooden carts. For instance, my grandmother used to tell me about how they used to travel from there village to the city for goods. She told me stories about how they used to walk that distance and still used to enjoy it. But now a days life had become much simpler and almost every family have there own vehicles . Even children's now a days have there personal automobiles.
Secondly, Education today had become easy to get, every one has right to be educated but in past, discrimination between boys and girls and caste used to be at peak. It still exists in people's mind but today no one can apart you from education because of such an established judicial system. My personal experience is a compelling example of this, when my grand mother used to be in her formative years she was deprived with education because of her sex. She fought a lot for it but still was not able to pursue. But today situations are reversed children's are being forcefully sent to school because now society know how important education is or them.
In conclusion, I reiterate my opinion by saying that life now a days have become way more comfortable than it ever used to be. I feel this way because now we have comfort of travelling and right to education and in past both were deprived for a section of society.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 51, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: If
... should always be better than our past. if we compare our era with past decades we...
^^
Line 1, column 146, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: nowadays
... know how comfortably we all are living now a days. so, I completely agree with the statem...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 150, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
...w how comfortably we all are living now a days. so, I completely agree with the statem...
^^^^^^
Line 1, column 158, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
...mfortably we all are living now a days. so, I completely agree with the statement ...
^^
Line 2, column 406, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: nowadays
...istance and still used to enjoy it. But now a days life had become much simpler and almost...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 412, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'days'' or 'day's'?
Suggestion: days'; day's
...e and still used to enjoy it. But now a days life had become much simpler and almost...
^^^^
Line 2, column 475, Rule ID: THERE_OWN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'their own'?
Suggestion: their own
...ch simpler and almost every family have there own vehicles . Even childrens now a days ha...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 493, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ost every family have there own vehicles . Even childrens now a days have there pe...
^^
Line 2, column 511, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: nowadays
...ave there own vehicles . Even childrens now a days have there personal automobiles. Secon...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 515, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
...there own vehicles . Even childrens now a days have there personal automobiles. Secon...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 90, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the past'?
Suggestion: in the past
... every one has right to be educated but in past, discrimination between boys and girls ...
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Line 4, column 59, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: nowadays
...eiterate my opinion by saying that life now a days have become way more comfortable than i...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 63, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
...rate my opinion by saying that life now a days have become way more comfortable than i...
^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, still, for instance, i feel, in conclusion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1510.0 1977.66487455 76% => OK
No of words: 330.0 407.700716846 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.57575757576 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49961616608 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.554545454545 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 495.9 618.680645161 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.2696411492 48.9658058833 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.8235294118 100.406767564 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4117647059 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.23529411765 5.45110844103 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.5376344086 235% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193495198103 0.236089414692 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0647419026256 0.076458572812 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0876141469172 0.0737576698707 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115998569798 0.150856017488 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0483431960547 0.0645574589148 75% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 11.7677419355 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 10.9000537634 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.26 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 86.8835125448 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.


Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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