Topic: Some people believe that government money should be spent on important things rather than arts such as painting and music. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is an arguable subject that what kind of viable step government should be taken to grow the economy of the nation. many people prefer to say that they should be a focus on major things such as transportation and education systems rather than arts like music or painting. I strongly agree with this statement because it is essential to spent money on considerable aspects.
For an underdeveloping country, it is hard to give satisfying service and fulfill the needs of local people. However, it should be the government's responsibility to provide important facilities such as transportation. In this fast-moving world, many people have to transfer in daily routine for jobs or school-college. In rural areas, For many people, it is difficult to find transportation services. Also, they have to spend more time on the Bus or trains. Research has shown that there are 60% of people who have to use day-to-day transport service and spend 3-4 hour on the transport of the day. I think that the government of the country should be spent money on this section like they can be extended shipment service or install the fastest transit service such as a bullet train.
Furthermore, it has been said that education is the basic foundation of developed countries. Thus, it should be the government`s responsibility to contribute tuition to every child of the nation. Even though, As per the report released by the authority, there are 20% of children who have deprived of schooling. So, In my opinion, the government needs to spend money on supply coaching for every student rather than additional aspects like arts.
To sum up, this is to say that it is necessary to spend money on significant departments rather than a minor division to provide satisfying service to the community.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 119, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Many
...aken to grow the economy of the nation. many people prefer to say that they should b...
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Line 3, column 136, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'governments'' or 'government's'?
Suggestion: governments'; government's
...local people. However, it should be the governments responsibility to provide important fac...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, so, thus, i think, kind of, such as, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1492.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0067114094 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03650299434 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.53355704698 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 455.4 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.4301642851 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.4666666667 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8666666667 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.53333333333 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269176983372 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0815305555383 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0818914502107 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164554894564 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0934877931534 0.056905535591 164% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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