International travel has many advantages to both travelers and the country they visited. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages along with your opinion
It goes without saying that travelling overseas brings with it many benefits not only for the tourists but also for the country they visit.
Even though it has some drawbacks like a strain on resources, in my opinion, an increase in the economy for the host nation and strengthening ties far outweigh these cons.
To embark on, the majority of the government's income comes from the tourism industry, especially of the nations where there are copious tourist spots. Furthermore, in order to fulfil various needs of the tourists, a range of service industries can be set up like hotel, restaurants, theatres and so on. As a result, there would be an increase in jobs, which could solve the nation-wide problem of unemployment. Secondly, foreign travellers can have a better understanding of the country by getting to know the culture and traditions of the nation which in turn could broaden their horizons. For instance, foreigners visiting and learning about the rich heritage of diversified country like India are all the more interested in advancing businesses and foreign ties leading
to economic growth.
On the other hand, an increase in tourism can adversely affect the resources of the country. Firstly, there are a number of tourists travelling around who recklessly litter the place and permanently harm the environment. Moreover, the host country could face problems of pollution, waste disposal leading to depletion of resources. An illustration of this is, visitors to sanctuaries and zoos like Gir Jungle of Gujarat, used to throw away plastic water bottles around along with leftovers of food which led to spreading dirt and filth, in turn leaving no space for lions to roam freely. Therefore, authorities have to levy strict regulations in order to avoid such a hazard.
To conclude, while it is true that travelling to foreign countries can cause some harm, but I do believe that the advantages that they provide to such countries are more vital. Hence it is advised to encourage tourism in order to improve the standard of living of citizens.
- You have had a bank account for a few years Recently you received a letter from the bank stating that your account is 240 overdrawn and that you will be charged 70 which will be taken directly from your account You know that this information is incorrect 73
- Extreme sports such as sky diving and skiing are very dangerous and should be banned To what extent do you agree or disagree 78
- Children who grow up in families which are short of money are better prepared with the problems of adult life than children who are brought up by wealthy parents To what extent do you agree or disagree 73
- You have a friend who lives in a city abroad You have decided that you would like to apply to do a course at one of the colleges in this city Write to your friend explaining what you would like to do Tell him her what type of work or studies you have been 89
- More people are now trying out different varieties of food which results in consumption of ingredients from different parts of the world Do you think this is a positive or negative development Provide specific reasons and examples to support your opinion 74
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 35, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'governments'' or 'government's'?
Suggestion: governments'; government's
...s. To embark on, the majority of the governments income comes from the tourism industry,...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 178, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...ovide to such countries are more vital. Hence it is advised to encourage tourism in o...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, while, for instance, as a result, in my opinion, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1732.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 339.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10914454277 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79786007304 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604719764012 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 529.2 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.1331259089 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.714285714 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2142857143 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.7142857143 7.06120827912 180% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180260198512 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0532461857182 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0737389058568 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110951712432 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0762405143192 0.056905535591 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.