a letter to a singer
Dear Mr. Tremain,
I saw your concert recently at Manchester Hall and I thought your persomance was very touching and excellent. I felt deeply connected with the lyrics in your songs.
I am a current music student at Oxford University and our school is having a musical performance next week. The play relates well to your lattest song and I would be very grateful if you can help with my musical activities by providing a more detail insight to your lyrics. Also, could you give me some tips about performing as this is our first performance? By giving an insight to your lyrics, our drama and musical team have a deeper connection to the song, which is what we really need.
I hope I am not asking for too much. My team really looks up to you and it would mean the world if you write back.
Thank you for reading this letter and I hope to hear from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
Vinh Chau
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 95, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hought your persomance was very touching and excellent. I felt deeply connected w...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, look, really, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 26.3917525773 61% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 733.0 937.175257732 78% => OK
No of words: 165.0 206.0 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.44242424242 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58402463422 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38162540665 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 127.690721649 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.672727272727 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 217.8 290.88556701 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.4005896185 44.8134815571 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.3 76.5299724578 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5 16.8248392259 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.9 4.34317383033 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0258560978023 0.216113520407 12% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0116640333944 0.0766984524023 15% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0349921001832 0.0603063233224 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.029160083486 0.12726935374 23% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0505067461507 0.0580467560999 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 8.37731958763 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.18 8.71597938144 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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