Some people say that the education system is the only critical factor in the development of a country. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
It is thought by many people that the progress of any nation completely depends on the standard of its education system. I partly agree with this notion as the education standard is only one element among several others, which contributes to the nation's growth.
Firstly, having high-grade schools and universities means that the future generation would be highly skilled with a confident personality and invincible communication skills. In other words, if the current generation is provided better education, they will become a successful leader, engineer, doctor or take-up many more great positions, which are the key to the prosperity of any nation. Furthermore, it is believed that well-informed citizens form a strong and affluent nation. To be more precise, education institutes are the place where students confront various aspects of life. For instance, a person gets to know about the worlds' history, geography, accounting and social values at a school, which provides a vast range of study material and good teaching techniques to make students better understand these concepts.
There are several other factors, which should be taken into consideration towards any country's advancement such as, medical services, poverty, economic growth and a few others. If these elements were ignored, this will have an adverse impact on the overall development of any nation. Therefore, equal importance should be given all these aspects. Furthermore, the progress of the nation is also impacted by the level of racism among people, which creates much more tension in comparison to any other problem. For instance, discrimination based on social status, caste, colour, gender and ethnicity.
In conclusion, although the high standard of education produces a skilled young generation, which is a future of the nation, i also believe that other essential facilities and services like the healthcare system, the number of less-privileged individuals also equally participate in the growth of any nation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 247, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'nations'' or 'nation's'?
Suggestion: nations'; nation's
...everal others, which contributes to the nations growth. Firstly, having high-grade ...
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Line 3, column 633, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'worlds'' or 'world's'?
Suggestion: worlds'; world's
...stance, a person gets to know about the worlds history, geography, accounting and soci...
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Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ipate in the growth of any nation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, so, therefore, well, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1713.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.56168831169 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93264143998 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.62012987013 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 535.5 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.2441458265 49.4020404114 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.769230769 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6923076923 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.093544666131 0.244688304435 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0360221978276 0.084324248473 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0487455600473 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0721082000731 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0669131594556 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.0946893788 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.26 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.9 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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