On a recent trip you lost a valuable item Fortunately you have travel insurance to cover anything lost Write a letter to the manager of the insurance company in your letter describe the item you lost to explain how you lost it tell the insurance company w

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On a recent trip, you lost a valuable item. Fortunately, you have travel insurance to cover anything lost.

Write a letter to the manager of the insurance company. in your letter

describe the item you lost
to explain how you lost it
tell the insurance company
what you want them to dO

Dear sir/Madam,

I am writing this letter to draw your attention to my concern about a recently lost watch during my air travel last week. Subsequently, request you provide me the required information to substitute my loss.

To furnish you with details, I am Ms.Sandra, a banker, holding an insurance policy with your Gateway insurance for five years. On the 24 of July, while traveling from Singapore to Malaysia, I was carrying a small piece of luggage which, included personal belongings. However, the suitcase is missing upon arrival, which was reported to the baggage help desk immediately.
I am severely disappointed about the lost luggage as it has my Rolex watch, which my husband gifted me on the occasion of our marriage anniversary. The handpiece was embedded with semi-precious stones and is the latest edition launched by Rolex. The same was intimated to the customer service of Singapore airlines. Besides, attaching the lost luggage report form for your reference.

I would be grateful if you can encash me with a claim for my lost property. Your support in filling the necessary documents to avail of my travel insurance would be anticipated.

Seeking a positive response,
Yours sincerely,
Ms.Sandra.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 38, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Sandra
... To furnish you with details, I am Ms.Sandra, a banker, holding an insurance policy ...
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Line 5, column 247, Rule ID: PERSONAL_OPINION_FRIENDSHIP[1]
Message: Use simply 'belongings'.
Suggestion: belongings
... small piece of luggage which, included personal belongings. However, the suitcase is missing upon ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 2, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...to the baggage help desk immediately. I am severely disappointed about the lost ...
^^
Line 12, column 4, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Sandra
...ositive response, Yours sincerely, Ms.Sandra.
^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, however, if, so, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1037.0 937.175257732 111% => OK
No of words: 198.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23737373737 4.54256449028 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93175184153 2.54303337028 115% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 127.690721649 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.656565656566 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 324.9 290.88556701 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.0151582075 44.8134815571 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.4166666667 76.5299724578 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5 16.8248392259 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.58333333333 4.34317383033 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222029217228 0.216113520407 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0728900892007 0.0766984524023 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.062454833425 0.0603063233224 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111539705697 0.12726935374 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0677997547812 0.0580467560999 117% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 8.37731958763 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 70.7449484536 78% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 8.71597938144 147% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.69 7.59969072165 128% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 41.2886597938 160% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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