Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
It is said that music is that flows beyond the boarders and horizons. It could get a range of people from various generations, with different cultural backgrounds together. I agree entirely with the statement and will present my opinion in the following.
Rithmic voices and sounds could attract individuals from different regions and make them both amazed and excited. Psychologically, music effects on audition nerves; consequently, the emotion will be influenced. These are some specific features of the body of the human, regardless of their geographical environments or cultures. Take the Turkish songs which Ebrahim Tatlis sings as the most patently obvious instance; they tend to be listened all over the world by people whom most of them do not understand the Turkish language and do not know what does Tatlis sing about, but some of them not only like them but also cry while they are played. Hence this means music moves beyond the borders.
In addition, music is not the thing that is attractive for a specific generation or age, and its notes are not written for individual people of specific ages, also non of the styles of music have been defined for the elderly or the young. Many Iranian youths, for instance, are interested in traditional music significantly, even more than some of the grandparents and playing the Tar, Setar, Santour, and other traditional musical instruments. Besides, many young Iranian guys tend to sing this type of music professionally. These are the evidence illustrating that music does not chose who listen to it and who does not.
In conclusion, music is one that ables to gather attracted people of different ages and different parts of the world to listen to the same thing.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, hence, if, so, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1439.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03146853147 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77537153782 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.58041958042 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 445.5 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 73.9744078567 49.4020404114 150% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.692307692 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.38461538462 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25667812162 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0822222067654 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0516180029401 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163908098092 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0403308838763 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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