You visited local beach and found out that there is a rubbish problem.
In your letter:
Describe the problem
How it affects people on the beach
Suggest what you want to do about them
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing concerning Palma beach, where I have been recently. The issue is that the beach is full of litter that people have left after spending a holiday on it. In fact, it is almost impossible to find a free sport without bumping on a glass of broken bottles, beer cans, wrappings, and watermelon peels, etc. It is understood that it is not only an ecology problem but also unsanitary conditions. As well as children may harm themselves stepping on the broken glass.
I strongly suggest you tackle this problem as soon as possible. First, it is recommended to send a cleaning team to the beach and remove all the trash. In addition, the administration might give an announcement for those who want to volunteer and help with picking up trash. The second measure will be introducing a fine for dumping waste on the beach and providing a sufficient amount of garbage bins.
I hope you will address my complaint at the earliest opportunity.
Sincerely yours,
Mariya
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| 2020-09-04 | Mariamirabella | 73 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 67, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... complaint at the earliest opportunity. Sincerely yours, Mariya
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, may, second, so, well, in addition, in fact, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 32.9175257732 58% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 831.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 170.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88823529412 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80131580551 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.7 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 245.7 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.0739217137 44.8134815571 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.5454545455 76.5299724578 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4545454545 16.8248392259 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.63636363636 4.34317383033 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179707535013 0.216113520407 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0573202731119 0.0766984524023 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0547973339359 0.0603063233224 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104302623497 0.12726935374 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0356688426387 0.0580467560999 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 8.37731958763 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 8.71597938144 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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