In contemporary society, food has become easier to prepare. Drawing on specific reasons and examples, do you think this has had an impact on the way people live?
Modern kitchen appliances and half-ready food products have eased the preparation of food. It has obviously had a great impact on the way people work and spend their leisure time.
Sophisticated cooking machines are widely used in the kitchen which saves a great amount of time for working people. In the past person who spent almost half of his day at work had to cook, which was quite tiresome, using simple kitchen tools spending another few hours. Fortunately, nowadays it requires only a few minutes to make the food ready thanks to a food processor, a microwave oven and other gadgets which allow the person to concentrate on their job, which, in turn, improves productivity. Also, working women chop and mincemeat or onions using an electric mincer, which consequently makes them be able to acquire education, work and make a career.
Moreover, frozen foods make a great contribution to improving people’s social and leisure life. Processed food products such as half-baked pizzas, canned fish and meat and tinned vegetables and fruits have decreased the time people used to spend in the kitchen in half or even more. The only thing they need to cook is a microwave oven and a few minutes. The rest of the spare time is then spent on reading books to enlarge worldview, doing sports to keep fit and healthy, or having a great family time to strengthen family bonds.
To sum up, I believe that people’s social wellbeing, working conditions and leisure time have become more available after the introduction of hi-tech kitchen devices and the production of processed food. Were it not for these, cooking food would not have been as simple and quick as this.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 478, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...oncentrate on their job, which, in turn, improves productivity. Also, working wo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, if, moreover, so, then, well, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1396.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95035460993 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5841990255 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.58865248227 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 426.6 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.335700703 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.333333333 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.08333333333 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1274319874 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0541320791879 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0446034228791 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100678545705 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0581464743458 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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