Some people think that the teenage years are the happiest times of most people’s lives. Others think that adult life brings more happiness, in spite of greater responsibilities. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
The issue of which stage of life brings us more contentment and joy is often debatable by many. Some argue that adolescence is the most enjoyable part of our lives, I partially agree to this thought. This essay will discuss how devoid of responsibilities and freedom to make mistakes contribute to this view also analyze exhilaration of not being accountable to anyone in later phase of lives with relevant example.
On one hand, most people often have profound memories and relationships from their teenage years. This is mainly due to the fact that many teenagers possessing hint of innocence and ignorance. It ensures that friendships forged are not based out of necessity or expectations. being delusional to consequences most often than not lead to some wild experiences. In addition to this, as youthful age is considered a learning phase, it is encouraged that youngsters make mistakes until they learn from it and also in expectations of not repeating it. To illustrate this, an Oxford study carried out by psychology students states that, 75% of successful long lasting relationships are either from highschool or college days. Thus, it is possible to say that adolescence is a defining stage where one is free to make mistakes and also build relationships resulting in happier life.
Although there is a case for teenage being joyous stage of many individuals live's, freedom associated with adulthood cannot be understated. One is free to lead a life on his or her own terms which in itself gives an adrenaline rush to many. Being an adult opens up various doors and multitude of choices such as switching careers , taking a break from life consequently giving a chance to explore life to the fullest. Even if responsibilities create a doubt prior to making a choice, it is often the person who is making the decision face consequences. Therefore it is conclusively clear that being independent offers liberation and little accountability to others which is crucial in leading a stress free,peaceful life.
In conclusion, both teenage and adulthood have their perks and rights which makes life memorable in respective stages however, I personally believe that naivety and innocence of teenage comprise happier times in life.
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- The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in towns and cities closing Do you agree or disagree 82
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, however, if, so, therefore, thus, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1888.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 365.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17260273973 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37092360658 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05979213813 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597260273973 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 599.4 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 130.1033777 49.4020404114 263% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 157.333333333 106.682146367 147% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.4166666667 20.7667163134 146% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.83333333333 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161047632802 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.052705380167 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0413469482577 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100550802152 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.021970771099 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.1 13.0946893788 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.3 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.45 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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