Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is better to use printed materials such as books and articles to do research than it is to use the Internet. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Conducting research, a critical learning process, has long been stressed by educators. Concerning the methods to carry out research projects, it has been an issue of debate whether utilizing printed materials is of more advantages than surfing online. From my perspective, books and articles are undoubtedly more advantageous compared to its counterpart.
To begin with, researching through printed sources causes less harm to a person's eyes. Considerable studies have revealed that radiation from digital devices can lead to serious eye issues, for example, myopia, especially when one is continuously working before the screen. Excellent research generally required a person's extensive efforts and time, which means, if they choose to sit sedentary before a computer in search of information, their eyes will suffer. I remember the last semester when I began to wear shortsighted glass due to much the undue amount of time researching online in order to finish my science research projects. In retrospect, if I had relied on the library to do my research instead of online sources, I could have had excellent eyesight as before.
Furthermore, materials from books are generally more credible than are those from the internet. One of the initial aims of the internet is to create an atmosphere where everyone can share their views freely and openly, seldom are there any restrictions. Owing to this, most content on the internet is editable to visitors, such as the famous Wikipedia. Since most information from the internet is not verifiable, individuals are susceptible to false or misleading information. Conversely, the publication of a book is normally strict. A book has to go through censorship, revising, editing, and so on to gain the opportunities to be published. A majority of publishers will only choose to publish those high quality books in order to guarantee a promising sale. Fortunately for readers, they can acquire credible information from most reference books.
To conclude, given that researching through books decreases damage to people's eyes and ensures believable sources for readers, it is reasonable to believe that printed materials are resources more preferable for research over online sources.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 312, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a person' or simply 'persons'?
Suggestion: a person; persons
.... Excellent research generally required a persons extensive efforts and time, which means...
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Line 2, column 536, Rule ID: TO_TOO[2]
Message: Did you mean 'too'?
Suggestion: too
... I began to wear shortsighted glass due to much the undue amount of time researchi...
^^
Line 4, column 71, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'people'.
Suggestion: people
...ching through books decreases damage to peoples eyes and ensures believable sources for...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
conversely, furthermore, if, so, as to, for example, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 43.0788530466 46% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1885.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 347.0 407.700716846 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43227665706 4.8611393121 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.010017133 2.67179642975 113% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 212.727598566 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605187319885 0.524837075471 115% => OK
syllable_count: 592.2 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.7914462949 48.9658058833 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.882352941 100.406767564 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4117647059 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.41176470588 5.45110844103 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152506596002 0.236089414692 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0463633909928 0.076458572812 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0326439039252 0.0737576698707 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.090814113722 0.150856017488 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0101773006985 0.0645574589148 16% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 11.7677419355 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 58.1214874552 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 10.9000537634 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.68 8.01818996416 121% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 86.8835125448 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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