It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behaviour to children?
There is a common belief that children at an early age must distinguish between right and wrong and punishment is required in some cases for them to differentiate the right and wrong. While some argue that punishment is essential to teach them change their behaviors, in my point of view, I partly disagree with this argument.
On the one hand, apt punishments could make them aware of their immoral behaviors. When children do something wrong like telling lies, disobeying and so on, it is necessary to be meted out to discipline them by their parents. From that they could realize that their mistake was not acceptable, and they could do better of their shortcomings. Parents might penalize their children by warning or minor physical punishment to avoid repeating their mistakes. For example, when I was at primary school, I didn’t do my homework so my mum punished me by requiring an extra hour per day for learning or I couldn’t watch any cartoons until I finished my exercise. This helped me realize my fault as well as increase my self-examination.
However, as far as I am concerned, these benefits are outweighed by their drawbacks. First, savage penalties might threaten their mental as well as physical health. This might lead the children to distress or depression, not to mention this can also lead to serious injuries by harsh punishment. According to scientific evidence, this action could make children scared to other people, and gradually their personality becomes irritable and angry with relatives as well as their friends. For instance, my cousin was often beaten badly by his parents and had all his favorite items confiscated when he made a mistake. Gradually, he was not only not afraid, but also disobeyed and opposed to his parents' requests. Moreover, the children are not matured enough to know why parents punish them by harsh disciplines. they may imitate their parents' actions and in turn this can cause them to be violent when they grow up.
In conclusion, in my point of view, punishment is one of the effective ways to guide the children learn this distinction. However, parents also should consider deliberately before penalizing as well as apply the appropriate penalty.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 813, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: They
...ents punish them by harsh disciplines. they may imitate their parents actions and i...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, moreover, so, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 56.0 24.0651302605 233% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1850.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 367.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0408719346 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37689890912 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81148475717 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564032697548 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 558.9 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.3900445587 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.777777778 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3888888889 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.22222222222 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 15.0 3.9879759519 376% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288463474618 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0893230559003 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0710303355419 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200183340176 0.151304729494 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0689579715499 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 813, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: They
...ents punish them by harsh disciplines. they may imitate their parents actions and i...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, moreover, so, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 56.0 24.0651302605 233% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1850.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 367.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0408719346 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37689890912 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81148475717 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564032697548 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 558.9 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.3900445587 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.777777778 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3888888889 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.22222222222 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 15.0 3.9879759519 376% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288463474618 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0893230559003 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0710303355419 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200183340176 0.151304729494 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0689579715499 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.