Popular events like the football world cup and other international sporting occasions are essential in easing international tensions and releasing patriotic emotions in a safe way. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Many people claim that sporting events such as the World Cup, the Olympics have a major impact on international relations and national unity. Personally, I strongly agree with this view. This essay will address some reasons for my view as follows.
It is true that sporting events help to ease international tensions. As an example, South Korea and North Korea were given a tremendous opportunity to reach a mutual understanding and respect due to various friendly football matches. It came as a big surprise to South Korea when North Korea spectators were rooting with enthusiasm. Through sports, two divided nations could cement their relationship in the hope of further cooperation in economics and politics in the near future.
On the other hand, some sports matches can greatly deteriorate relations. For instance, football and baseball games are two of the main drivers that lead to a severe relationship between Korea and Japan. the two rivals sometimes express their patriotism in an aggressive way. An even much worse scenario is that there's rising invisible discrimination between the two countries directly aiming at the players.
For the reasons mentioned above, I would support that international sporting occasions play a crucial role in easing tensions and releasing patriotism safely between different nations. However, I also believe that a combination of solidarity, absolute respect holds an enormous significance to long-lasting peaceful relations.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, thus, for instance, such as, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1247.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 227.0 315.596192385 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.49339207048 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96109310013 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.660792951542 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 381.6 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.1600845621 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.9230769231 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4615384615 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.23076923077 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22153362131 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0752026448311 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.079725905668 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124546470028 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0512242267925 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.56 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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