Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions. Some people think is fully justified while others think it is unfair.
There is a fact that successful people who specialize in sports have a higher income than others, who are professionals in other areas. Which have resulted in different ideas, someone think it is reasonable, while others say it to be prejudiced. These two opinions will be discussed in the essay below.
There are several reasons why successful sportsmen earn more than others. The first one is for their health, to be a professional, a sportsman need to practise intensively everyday, which can results in bad health situations when getting older. Hence, a great deal of money is acceptable. Second, the age of people engaging in the area of sports is limited, so the whole amount of money they earn and others do, to some extends, are the same. No one can have the ability to play a sport when he or she is too old. Actually, when the age comes, someone can continuous with their career by becoming coaches and even earn more than before, but the number is minor.
On the other hand, it is also unjustifiable that some people can earn too much more than others. Professional sport people are not the only to contribute to the human race, people in other areas do too. Moreover, it is not sport that have the most positive impact on the life. For instance, while footballers just have people to entertain themselves, scientists discover new ways to make the human race goes further.
In my opinion, successful people in sports deserve a good deal of money as salary; however, too much money can results in discrimination that sportsmen are prioritized.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
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Suggestion: thinks
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Line 2, column 172, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
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Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'result'
Suggestion: result
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e than before, but the number is minor. On the other hand, it is also unjustifia...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, hence, however, if, moreover, second, so, while, for instance, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1292.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8029739777 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68289733606 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.561338289963 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 410.4 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.0676395768 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.2857142857 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2142857143 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.78571428571 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.427536456408 0.244688304435 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.138602254373 0.084324248473 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0916029619713 0.0667982634062 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.246736028816 0.151304729494 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.036607857127 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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