The graph below shows the average monthly use of health club in Miami and Florida by all full-time members in 2017. The pie charts show the age profile of male and female members of this health club.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph and pie chart in combination depicts, the ratio of full time membership of health club in Miami and Florida in 2017, and the age factor of male and female affecting in membership of these both health club.
Overall, as shown by bar chart, the ratio of male membership are dominating female over the year, additionally, 21 to 45 age group of male are using health club in significant ratio compare to others,
In details, roughly 550 male used health club in Jan, while, slightly decreased in February and again rose in next month and reached to around 600. The graph depicts the fluctuation pattern whole year, where, in June was accounted for highest figure of male, nearly 900, after that, decreasing trend took place and become nearly 600 in December. Whereas, the female membership also followed same pattern but less than male user for whole year. Female membership commenced with approximately 500 in Jan, reached at highest point in august and September with over 700 and with varied fluctuation decreased in December with just 500.
Regarding to pie chart, in the age between 21 to 45, male dominated the female by 5%, in contrast, 31% female used fitness center, where, only 25% are male after 65. Beside this two age group, 20% and 19% are accounted for male and female membership respectively.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 62, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
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Line 3, column 42, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'club' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'clubs'.
Suggestion: clubs
...n details, roughly 550 male used health club in Jan, while, slightly decreased in Fe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, regarding, so, whereas, while, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 33.7804878049 127% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1098.0 965.302439024 114% => OK
No of words: 224.0 196.424390244 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90178571429 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51018334154 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 106.607317073 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558035714286 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 328.5 283.868780488 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 22.4926829268 142% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 79.1126811992 43.030603864 184% => OK
Chars per sentence: 156.857142857 112.824112599 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.0 22.9334400587 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.14285714286 5.23603664747 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.284469575047 0.215688989381 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.138988059798 0.103423049105 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.12643334765 0.0843802449381 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.213116018154 0.15604864568 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.110975246544 0.0819641961636 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 13.2329268293 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.46 61.2550243902 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.3012195122 142% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 27.5 11.4329268293 241% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.9970731707 135% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.